This is your personal progress report for the semester. It tracks how your writing has developed across five assignments in English/Economics, based on individual AI-assisted feedback after each task.
You earn XP for each assignment based on your score and improvement. Higher grades and bigger jumps earn more.
Note from Ms Borgwardt
You started the semester well below class average, and I can see how much effort you have put in since then. The dip at the SWOT analysis was a tough moment, but instead of giving up you came back stronger. Your use of professional vocabulary and IT terminology has improved significantly, and your writing is becoming more structured with every task. One grammar pattern still needs your attention: subject-verb agreement keeps slipping through, especially with collective nouns like "target group." But overall this is solid progress. Keep it up.
3+
Current Grade
+2 levels since start
2
Improvement Streak
Tasks 4 and 5
1
Grammar Errors
-3 since first task
8/23
Class Ranking
Top 35%
Grade Trajectory vs. Class Average
Your points per assignment compared to the class. Each task is graded out of 15 points.
Error Reduction by Category
Number of errors per category in each assignment. Shorter bars = fewer errors = progress.
Subject-verb agreement, plurals
Formal register, word choice
Industry terms, technical language
Analysis quality, specificity
Skills Profile
How your skills have developed across five areas. A bigger shape means stronger skills overall.
Achievements
Milestones you have unlocked this semester. Greyed-out badges are still up for grabs.
1
First Feedback
Reviewed all corrections in your first feedback
2
Bounce Back
Improved after a plateau at Task 3
NEW
3
Grammar Progress
Reduced grammar errors from 4 to 1
5
5 Tasks Done
Completed all five semester assignments
NEW
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Above the Line
Scored above class average for the first time
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Grammar Pro
Submit a task with zero grammar errors
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Tech Speaker
Use 5+ IT terms correctly in one task
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5-Task Streak
Improve your grade 5 times in a row
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Grade 1 Club
Reach a grade of 1 on any assignment
Before and After
Writing Quality: First vs. Latest Assignment
Two different tasks, five months apart. Same student. Look at how the language, structure, and use of technical terms have developed.
Task 1: Target Group Analysis (4+)
My target group are people studying from the age 18 and up until the average age of finishing studys such as university which are 22 and 27. My target group isn't bound by nation and is accessible globally. My AI can help them with their studies and allow them to save time. My AI also makes studying easier. The ads would be inspiring and professional of the sorts.
Task 5: Investor Pitch (3+)
Our app is called StudyBuddy and it solves the problem that most students don't have a structured revision plan and waste time studying things they already know. The app uses an algorithm that tracks what you got wrong and creates personalized quizzes so you only revise what you actually need. We use a freemium model where the basic version is free but the premium features like AI-generated flashcards costs 4.99 per month. Our main competitors are Anki and Quizlet but they don't offer personalized learning paths. We plan to acquire users through campus ambassadors at universities and through TikTok where our target group are most active.
Green = strong use of professional language and marketing concepts | Red underline = remaining grammar issues
Assignment History
All five assignments this semester with grades, correction counts, and XP earned.
1
Target Group Analysis
Sept 29, 2025 - 10 corrections
4+ (6.3 pts)
+180 XP
2
Market Research Report
Nov 3, 2025 - 8 corrections
3- (7.8 pts)
+280 XP
3
SWOT Analysis
Dec 8, 2025 - 7 corrections
3- (7.5 pts)
+260 XP
4
Business Plan Draft
Jan 19, 2026 - 4 corrections
3 (9.0 pts)
+420 XP
5
Investor Pitch
Feb 24, 2026 - 3 corrections
3+ (10.2 pts)
+540 XP
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